Jedi Order -=Year 243=-
Jedi Order Temple => Other Star Wars stuff => Lore and Legend - Star Wars => : Jack Chronos April 18, 2007, 12:31 AM
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As you can see, I've reposted my original "C-PI: Coruscant Private Investigator" story.
I've ultimately decided to REwrite the sequal, "C-PI: The Cairn" because I was unhappy with the first attempt. So if any admin has the capability, feel free to delete the C-PI story in these forums that was created by "Jedi Order Droid".
I love feedback and I love it when people give ideas and opinions about the story and where they feel it is going...SO SPEAK UP PLEASE! bua ha ha...
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I'd suggest leaving the old one up anyway for us "fans" to read.
Regards,
Menelaos
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Indeed, that's a good idea master Menelaos. I still enjoy reading them.
~ Favian
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Well, ok...though I'm not a fan of that idea myself, as Hector Berlioz would say, the public has spoken!
I'll get on transfering them all as soon as possible.
DISCLAIMER: I have no idea if Hector Berlioz, a revolutionary french romantic composer during the 1800s, ever actually said that, nor do I have any reason to think so...I was just making stuff up.
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^_^ I like reading it, great story. I'm trying to finish Battlefield Earth though, so I'll do that and then finish your story.
-- Kaeawc Farore
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I like the story line ad mee to your fan list ^_^ lol
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haha, ok you can be the first.
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Hey buddy, Nice work you got going here.
Its nice to see someone pump out stories like that, good motivator. not like that red R2 unit.
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haha, ok you can be the first.
Yay! lol
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I know I've been adding alot of new chapters lately, so let me know if it's hard to keep up, please. I don't want to lose my limited reader base....
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Nobody's telling me to slow down which means one of two things:
1. I can continue...
2. ...or nobody's reading...
*and the halls of the temple echoed the words, as if only the dead had heard*
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I say you should continue.
~ Favian
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haha ok, I was wondering if anyone was bothering with reading them.
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I have been :)
-- Kaeawc Farore
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I have been, good reads
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I have :)
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das ist gut
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Excuse me? what did you call me!?! ;)
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I enjoy any feedback available. If anyone has any reactions or thoughts, please share.
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Great as usual, I am totally digging it keep up the good work.
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Printed it out again and going to read it before I fall in a deep deep dream ^^ Keep up the good work !
~ Favian
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AWESOME!
Regards,
Menelaos
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It's been a while, I know, but I'm still going to finish these.
I practically rewrote most of the chapter when Jack wakes up in the cell, so go ahead and read that if you want to follow along with the plot...it's a large change that moves the story forward a bit.
I'll also be adding a new chapter immediately after this post.
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OK, looking forward to it. Going to read all again when I return from holiday ^^ Then I have something to wait for !
~ Favian
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:D I can see what's coming... I think. Nice plot though, good foreshadowing.
-- Kaeawc Farore
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The last few chapters were getting sporadic and too emotional, I thought, and that's just not Jack. But thankfully it will actually fit in nicely later when-...well, you'll see.
The whole point of this story is to see how quickly Jack gets pulled into everything, almost completely out of his control, and how the events of the first C-PI story were only the beginning.