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Jedi Master Favian Eia Valérii
« on: February 25, 2007, 08:48 AM »
Name: Favian Eia Valérii
Species: Zabrak
Homeplanet: Kamino

Chapter I: The beginning

*Kabam!* 'Milan, hurry up! Please, Milan hurry up!' said a screeming woman. *Bwam!* A pregnant woman and her husband were chaised by bounty hunters. 'Please stay calm Syl, I'm finding a safe planet for us!' The man was trying to evade the fire from the hunters. *Bwam!* 'Milan ?! What was that?' *Tuut tuut* All kinds of red lights turned on. 'They hit our left engine, we need to land on that planet there! *Bwam!* Another hit. All turned black...

'Hello there' said a friendly voice. 'My name is Jedi Master Kor'Keel, welcome to our planet Kamino. You need rest miss. Lots of rest. But you're in good hands.' The woman looked around, and all turned black again...

When the woman woke up again, many people were standing around here. 'Congratulations miss, it's a boy!' said the friendly voice again. 'You have a name for him?' 'Fav.. ian...' and the woman fainted again.

Days later, the mother of the boy called Favian opened here eyes. 'Good morning miss, I'm not sure if you noticed all that happened. You're able to talk? ' 'Yes' she said with all her strenght. 'Okidoki, then I'll start with the good news. Your son born healthy and he's doing fine. I'm sure he'll grown up wise and strong. He has your eyes, so he will be as pritty as you are miss. '
'Mister, can I see him please ?'
'Later, and call me Lia'Soii. The bad news, is that your husband died while trying to save you. You two hit the ocean very hard. We were lucky we could save you. '
The Kaminoan turned his head down and walked out. At the same time, another came in and gave the woman her child.

Chapter II: Watching the rain on Kamino

'Favi, Favi! Hurry up! School starts!'
'Yes mother...'
'You know that Yon'Teii said you should come today, you have some special test! So hurry up!'

A 6 year old boy walked out of his bedroom, halfdressed, took his stuff and ran out of the door!

'See you mum!'

He came into the streets of District 3, road 142. He looked around and decided he should take the first road left. Without looking he ran into someone. *Bam!* 'Hello there little one!' Favian got up. 'Oh, I'm deeply sorry Master Kor'Keel.' 'Don't worry, no one died.' He showed his friendly face and laughed. 'But hurry up now. You know that Yon'Teii is a disciplined man, so I'm sure you don't want to be late for your lessons. Oh yes, give your mum my regards!' While running down the streets he looked back and shouted 'Will do master Kor'Keel, will do!'

'Good morning little one, you're just on time.' 'Sorry Yon'Teii, it won't happen again.' 'Hehe, no problems! You're ready to start doing the test ?' 'Sure thing!' An exited boy started to do some little test.

Hours later...

'Mum, I'm back! Muuuuuuuuuuhuuuuuum! Hmm, weird. She should have been here. Well, then I'll search down the kitchen for food myself.' When he got into the kitchin, the door opened. From the soft footsteps, he knew it was his mum. 'Hello Favian. How was your day?'
'Nice, Yon'Teii showed me some nice things. Actually, you can do a lot of things with rain. I was able to hang my hand out of the window, without getting wet. They just didn't hit my hand. He called it 'the force'. Kinda scary actually.'
'Haha, sounds awesome son... sounds awesome.'

Chapter III: Meeting an old friend

It was a rainy day, like all on Kamino. Nothing specials at first sight. But things can turn out different then most people think when they get up. There he was, whispering and happy walking through the cloning facility with his mentor Yon'Teii.

'You're enjoying this Favian? '
'Yes, much!' said the eleven year old boy.
'Wonderfull, because I have to tell you even nicer things.'
'Oh?'
'Just wait, just wait!' and Yon'Teii smiled.

When they walked out to the facility and got into the hanger, Favian saw a good friend.

'Master Kor'Keel! Oh, that has been long!' he shouted.
'Hehe. Inde,ed, it was.'
'Why the visit master?'
'Show some patience my young friend. Things will be explained soon.'
'Inde,ed, there is something called patience my friend' said Yon'Teii, 'but I can imagine that you're exited. We all would be, wouldn't we Master Kor?'
'Hehe. Indee,d my friend. Favian, you know I'm a Jedi Master. I've told you many stories.'
'Yes... you did master. What are you wanting to tell.'
Master Kor'Keel shows his magnificent smyle again. 'You know that Yon'Teii always told you about things you could do. The so called tests. But you never seem to notice that you were the only one who was possible to do them. Yon'Teii never could show you an example. Well, you're a gifted boy. You have something Jedi call midichloran. This is a scale which shows how many 'force' you have inside you. If possible, and your mum allready said it was OK, I would like to ask you to come with me and show what you can do at the Jedi Order Temple.'

Chapter IV: New experiences and more

'Favian, keep in mind all that I've told you.'
'Ok master.'

Master Kor'Keel landed the ship safely in the hanger, and they went into the great hall.

'Please wait here young one, till someone gets here to take you to the council.'

Many Jedi walked by. They didn't seem to notice that the boy was there.

Minutes stroke, but they looked like hours for Favian.

'Oh, sorry!' said a guy who walked to Favian. 'I totally forgot about you. My name is Jedi Knight Kaeawc Farore. I'm the one who should take you to the council. Apperantely, some other things showed up. Padawan Jorka broke the 'dark jedi simulator' again. But follow me please.'

Knight Kaeawc told him something about the council, that master Kor'Keel forget to tell him. Things like don't look to long to the robot arm of Master Xzar-Bin, he doesn't like that and that Master Menelaos thinks it's not honourable to just say 'Yes master.' He always wants the name too.

'Favian Eia Valérii'
'Yes?'
'I didn't say anything my friend' said Knight Kaeawc. 'That's something else too, master can tell you things from a long distance. Only you can hear it. I think that you have to go in. Good luck and may the force be with you.'

Chapter V: The master of the Council.

A nervous boy walked into a great rounded hall. There were a lot of chairs, but only three of them were seated.

'Welcome little one.' said a big hairy beast. 'I'm master Xzar-Bin, but you can call me master Bin. I'm a wookiee. Normally Master Menelaos leads this, but since he's at a trial now, I'm the one who will guide you trough this.'

'Greetings.' said the master next to Master Bin. Favian recognised his face from the hologram Master Kor'Keel was watching while travelling to Courescant. No doubt, it was Master Alpha Jhen.

On his back said another master, he had his roob and hood on. You could only see his white eyes. 'I am who people call master Achilles and I warn you, you don't want to be an enemy of me.'

'Haha, why are you always scaring the younglings my friend?' It was a strange voice that Favian didn't hear yet. 'Turn to your back my friend.' He turned on and an old man stand in front of him. 'Councilors, we can start, master Menelaos is present. And master Bin, if you want to be so gentle, please get out of my seat.'

'And ? How did it go ?' While walking out of the hall Master Kor'Keel allready stood there.

'I'm not sure Master. Master Achilles took his robe off.'

'OH! That's a good sign my friend. Now follow Knight Xodus, he looks fermilliar to Master Bin, he'll show you around in here. Now hurry up and show your patience and well manners!'

Chapter VI: Jedi Knight Xodus and Master Foxen Mert

'So you must be Favian ? Welcome in here. I'm Jedi Knight Xodus. Look up... ' and the wookiee grunts.

'Oh, hello...'

'Follow me please, I'll show you around in these halls. I'm sure that they pick me out for these jobs because of my length, don't you think?'

'Uhm... yes Knight Xodus.'

'Haha, I can imagine you're speakless, just like me. When Master Bin brought me here... ' Knight Xodus' eyes were twinkling. 'Anyway, here are the training halls. If you would get in and you would find a master, I'm sure that you'll be here often.'

'Knight Xodus ? Who is that person ?'

'That ? Oh, that's Master Foxen Mert. He's one of the only masters who's wisdom lies in making jokes. Hello Master Mert!'

'YOU!' said the Master with a big smyle.

'Yes me.'

Master Mert bowed and wispered something in Favians ear. 'You know that he's hairy ?'

'Hahaha... very funny Master Mert' said Knight Xodus kinda annoyed.

'Little one, can I show you something nice?'

'Sure... master.'

Master Mert used the force to hang the young one upside down and started to laugh.

'MASTER MERT! Please stop it' and the Wookiee made himself very big and looked master Mert straight into his eyes.

'Okidoki!' He turned Favian back on his feet and walked away, lauching and wispering in one time.

'Well, you met him. Beware of the Fox I would say.' and the Knight grunted again!

Chapter VII: Welcome to the Jedi Order

'Good morning Favian'

Favian opens his eyes. 'Gooooooodmorn... uh?' He looks around but doesn't see anyone. 'Oh, this must be that long distance talking?'

'Inde,ed. Try to guess who I am.'

'Master Menelaos ?'

'Haha, I'm not that old.'

'Master Alpha ?'

'Nope, I'm Knight Kaeawc, the one who brought you to the councilors yesterday. The council wants to see you again, they wanted me to get you. But I think you know the way yourself now.'

'Ok Knight Kaeawc, give me a minute?'

Favian hurried as fast as he could. He had to ask some people to get there, but after some minutes he reached the council.

He was supprised only Knight Kaeawc and Master Menelaos were there.

'Good morning little one.' said the old man.

'Good morning both Master Menelaos and Knight Kaeawc.'

'The council decided that you're a boy who can help us a lot in the future. After a long talk we decided that you're ready to become a padawan of the Jedi Order. Congratulations.'

'Congratulations' said the young Knight next to him.

'Thanks... master Menelaos.'

'As first Knight Kaeawc will explain you some things that you must know since you're a padawan now. I wish you good luck and may the force be with you.'

'Follow me padawan Favian, it's going to be rough, so lock and load!'

More chapters coming soon...
« Last Edit: February 17, 2013, 05:43 AM by *<JO>*Favian Eia Valérii »

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Re: Padawan Learner Favian Eia Valérii
« Reply #1 on: April 11, 2012, 05:15 AM »
My apologies for reviving this thread and denying the warning though I must admit it put a smile on my face reading this after years. Never knew my fantasy was that stereotypical at that time haha.

It's nice to see a story I've actually written doesn't really remind me of the boy I used to be something like six years ago (since this post was transferred from the old forums I think it has an age around six years).

For all who actually read of have read this, I hope it brings you a smile to your faces too. Hope that new padawans make their own stories too so I have something to read too from time to time.

Kind regards,

Favian Eia Valérii.

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Re: Padawan Learner Favian Eia Valérii
« Reply #2 on: April 11, 2012, 05:43 AM »
Just gave this a quick read-through. You really wrote that five years ago? You're a natural story-teller, ever considered writing anything else?


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Re: Padawan Learner Favian Eia Valérii
« Reply #3 on: April 11, 2012, 06:41 AM »
Well, actually six or more years ago! Never considered it, and not going to consider actually. Way too less time and besides that, way too less knowledge of the current feeling and familiarity of the Order at this time.

I'd love to see more and more old members finding their way back to these forums again though I can't deny I like logging in here and seeing it's starting to live once more like it used to.

Good to see you back Master, it has been long long time!

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Re: Padawan Learner Favian Eia Valérii
« Reply #4 on: April 11, 2012, 11:15 AM »
I know exactly what you mean, coming up with stories can be very time-consuming! Things like film scripts can take years to be finished, and it only translates into ~90-120 minutes of screen-time. Plus, once you're out of the loop with our Order, it's very hard to get back in. It's never too late though, once you get more time on your hands at least. ;) Fingers crossed this happens for you in the foreseeable future, though we understand how busy and hectic your life is!

It has indeed been a long time! Sadly I'll be disappearing again in a few days, but thankfully the finishing line is now on the horizon and in a couple of months I'll be back on my feet. It's good to be around though, no matter how short-lived it'll be.

Looking at the life that's gripping our Order as you mentioned, I can imagine everything'll be in full force come summer-time when I get back. I hope you'll still be popping by at this point?


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Re: Padawan Learner Favian Eia Valérii
« Reply #5 on: April 12, 2012, 10:12 AM »
Why am I always the bad guy?

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Re: Padawan Learner Favian Eia Valérii
« Reply #6 on: April 13, 2012, 05:01 AM »
Haha, well, according to the date this has been written you haven't change that much Master ?

~ Favian Eia Valérii