Jedi Order -=Year 243=-
Jedi Order Temple => Other Star Wars stuff => Lore and Legend - Star Wars => : ChrisGrim March 28, 2009, 12:46 PM
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As it goes on I expect some people to want to say something, so here is where to get that going.
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Nice! Write more so that I can read more ;) lol
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Nice! Write more so that I can read more ;) lol
I should be posting Chapter 2 and 3 today.
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Sounds good!
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It looks good..the last bit sort of reminded me of Anakin v. Obi Wan, though.
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It looks good..the last bit sort of reminded me of Anakin v. Obi Wan, though.
The last bit is a piece of a much earlier peace done as I left the clan and posted in SoP before Drake-tar deleted the forums. And, to be fair, it's **** near impossible to write a convincing Master vs. Padawan fight without sounding like Anakin and Obi-Wan... I tried several different ways and it all came the same way, especially in the context of the story (Grim leaving the Jedi Order to join a Sith Order)... Honestly, if I could have made it different, made it not sound like that, I would have.
EDIT: I tried re-writing that piece, so hopefully it's a little less Revenge of the Sith. Since it was never posted in this forum no one can really know what was said but me, so I can change it at will, lol.
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WOOHOO!
Alright, haven't read it yet...will be doing so as the day goes one while i can sneak peaks in and out.
I soooo better be in there as one ass kicking Master!!!
Regards,
Menelaos
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Chapters 4 and 5 are up, 6 is being worked on.
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I really like the new stuff. Keep going, I enjoy reading this.
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WOOHOO!
Alright, haven't read it yet...will be doing so as the day goes one while i can sneak peaks in and out.
I soooo better be in there as one ass kicking Master!!!
Regards,
Menelaos
Your dead so your judokick would go through everyone.
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WOOHOO!
Alright, haven't read it yet...will be doing so as the day goes one while i can sneak peaks in and out.
I soooo better be in there as one ass kicking Master!!!
Regards,
Menelaos
Your dead so your judokick would go through everyone.
He makes a valid point.
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^_^ Finally someone wrote something! *applauds*
I really like it, good writing, good story.
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^_^ Finally someone wrote something! *applauds*
I really like it, good writing, good story.
Thank you.
I'm looking to hopefully work on it more tomorrow, maybe complete it. I don't know where I'm going to take this 'You are the Sith Lord, Jedi Chris' storyline, I just liked the nice contradiction it gave and that it means Chris will further have to pay for his decisions as Grim/Duplicity. Kind of like... a reminder that no matter what we do we're always haunted by the decisions we make.