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My new not yet done autobioghrapy.
« on: March 01, 2008, 12:30 AM »
I've been working on this, comments please? Yes my English isn't that good.. :S

Ek'obalo woke up. It was cold inside the room. Where was he? The room had gray walls and so had the ground.
 He got of his bed and looked around, there was a bed, a small chair and a door. Ek walked to the door and just a second before his nose would touch the door, it flew open.
The room was all white and the bright light blinded him. Ek noticed there was some sort of shower in the room, a toilet and again that little chair. Ek washed himself and went back to the room where he woke up. Ek stayed in the room for a while till another door flew open! It looked excactly like the wall, so Ek didn't notice the door. A large Wookiee stepped into the room. Ek reconigzed him, it was Knight Xodus! Ek met Knight Xodus a long time ago he was 8 back then. 'Hello Ek'obalo', Knight Xodus said, 'How do you feel? Yesterday you fell asleep before we even got in the ship so I dragged you down here'. Knight Xodus smiled.
'Hello, Knight Xodus. I am fine but a bit tired'. Ek gasped. Knight Xodus gave Ek'obalo a tour through the ship. It was a big ship and alot of people were in it.'We are traveling with a ship from a friend of mine,' Knight Xodus explained,'He bought this ship and made some sort of lets say... He made a ''bus'' from it. it is like a bus with all kind of stops and planet who he visits but you can also sleep in here/eat in here and make some fun in here.'
'ahh, so that's why there are alot of people here'. Ek said.
'yes Ek, that's why, our next stop will be Coruscant, we will go to the Jedi Order temple from there.'
'Great!'Ek replied. He couldn't wait till the ship landed, so that he and Knight Xodus could finnaly go to the Jedi Order Temple.


After we landed on Coruscant we got something to eat. After that we continued our travel to the Jedi Order Temple.
When we managed to get in, we were welcomed by ''Master LeiNix''. He was a nice guy and explained me what I needed to do to be accepted in the Jedi Order Temple.
first he asked about my past, how did I get here, how did you find out you was ''force sensitive'' and that sort of things.
'Well', Ek said,'I grew up in Felucia, with my parents and my sister. My father had a job as transalator at our city, so we could live very well.
Our house was in the middle of the city and it was on a hill, called the Isaru Hill. I don't know why it was called like that but it was called like that since I was born.
I think it was when I was 4... Maybe 5 no I was 6, when I saw a Jedi. Well 2 Jedi. It was Knight Xodus. He was on a mission with his Padawan, Padawan Chrippe. I wouldn't have notice them if they just walked by and left again. But, when they came to the center(where I and my Mother were buying food) someone shouted:'Catch the thief! He stole my food!'
The 2 responded immeaditly, the jumped over the crowd and landed in front of the Twi'Lek who stole the food. Out of suprise the man his stolen food fell and he ran away. I grabbed the food and returned it to the person from where it belonge. But just before I'd hand it over, it all fell out of my hands! Clunsy me, I always had that sort of things, when I grabbed it again I saw that 1 apple stayed in the air! It was like magic! I grabbed the apple and now returned it to the woman, who was a bit scared because of the flying apple.
Knight Xodus whisperd something to Padawan Chrippe and after that Knight Xodus talked with my mother. I couldn't hear a thing; I was distracted; I saw a butterfly.

After years and years later, I saw 2 people, hooded, enter the city. It was when I had the age of 9. They climbed Isaru and ringed our bell. My mother opend and let the 2 in. After they had something to drink they asked for me. My mother got me in the room, and then I saw who they were, Knight Xodus and Padawan Chrippe!
I said Hello:'Knight Xodus and Padawan Chrippe!'. I smiled. Knight Xodus said: Hello, but not anymore, Jedi Chrippe received the title of Jedi. Jedi Chrippe smiled.''Well congratsulations! .'' Ek smiled. After a talk with the 2, they told me what happend back then about the apple and the food.
'ohh, that's why I am always that clunsy!'Knight Xodus replied:'Yes, Ek. That is also why you are going to travel with us!'



« Last Edit: December 13, 2008, 02:23 AM by *<JO>*Ek'obalo,JK »

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Re: My new not yet done autobioghrapy.
« Reply #1 on: June 16, 2008, 10:48 PM »
Oh, great :D I thought I lost this... I'll work on this soon again.