Topic: Short Biography

[Lumiann Keel]

It was 6 in the morning when lumiann jumped out from his bed all sweat .. One of the Usual nightmares for him ..
he kept seeing a man doing horrible things and making people suffer and die. That man had pale skin with no hair..
he had a big scar on his cheek and was wearing a black hooded robe... Lumiann didn't recognize the man and was trying to find out
if he was real ... 

Since his father was the ambassador of Alderaan once He was good in diplomatic relations .. And lately a jedi master
who named Master Veniku visited his father for diplomatic purposes and he saw the young man and warned the father that his son was strong with
the force ..

His father did know that Lumiann was different from the beginning but he didn't want to show it to the council because
Lumiann was the only child that he had and didn't want to lose him . Lumiann would be more of politician rather
than a jedi .. It was more safe and secure in father's opinion ..

Plus, that strong bound with the force comes from his mother which was a jedi once and fell in love with the father .. then with
her other passions .. then finally she fell to dark side and was killed by the order in deserts of Tatooine ..

What if Lumiann inherited her passion? .. His father couldn't survive a second lost in the family..

But the young man was stubborn and eager.. He insisted to go to Academy and start his training if the council would accept him ..
Since Master Veniku approved that he could come and try, he would blieve in him and his future somehow..

In couple weeks Lumiann will go and start the Training in the Jedi Temple of Tython , he wasn't scared of space traveling since
he came from a rich family he has done it many times before .

Lumiann was trying to be patient and wait for his time to come ..

To be continued...

[Lumiann Keel]

I am not too good at writing .. hope you like it

May the force be with you

[Tomius Nu'vada]

It's great! Can't wait for the next one! 

[*<JO>*Veniku Dar Adias]

Short and to the point. Dont worry im no good at writing stories neither Lumiann.

~Ven

[Lumiann Keel]

It's great! Can't wait for the next one! 

Thank you tomius

[Lumiann Keel]

Short and to the point. Dont worry im no good at writing stories neither Lumiann.

~Ven

Thanks master Ven i am relieved

[Lumiann Keel]

After his journey ro Tython Lumiann started his training . Faced the first dagners and menaces in his life .. council decided to continue his training but letting the force to guide .. That was a dangerous path for a padawan ..

When council sent him to Taris , he met With Master Veniku again .. and asked him to be his master ..

As a first test, he asked Lumiann a simple question that needs a complicated and wise answer :

'Why ?' asked the wise master .  'Why would you like to be my padawan and What would you do if you were it ? .. '

Lumiann stood there and thought for a second . and said:

'I will dedicate myself to your teachings and will serve the order in everyway i can .'
and added:
' and will try to express my thoughts that could help the order even go further'

Master Veniku steered at him with caution .

' A noble answer' he said ' except the last part' .

Lumiann was so embarassed that he became speechless for a second . But then he thought quickly and replied:

'you are right Master Veniku, i wtill need to learn how to control my feelings and not to express it everywhere.. '

That humble answer seemed to satisfy the precautious Jedi master for asking the Council about taking Lumiann as a padawan Learner ..

A new path was finally set for that clever young boy to fulfill his destiny..

To be continued .. 

[Elod-Hora]

Major spoilers present 

Stopped reading just before 

Good job, anyway! I tried to make a blog out of my story, but it's not very easy, so I really appreciate your efforts.