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Offline Jack Chronos

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Discussion: C-PI stories
« on: April 18, 2007, 12:31 AM »
As you can see, I've reposted my original "C-PI: Coruscant Private Investigator" story.

I've ultimately decided to REwrite the sequal, "C-PI: The Cairn" because I was unhappy with the first attempt. So if any admin has the capability, feel free to delete the C-PI story in these forums that was created by "Jedi Order Droid".

I love feedback and I love it when people give ideas and opinions about the story and where they feel it is going...SO SPEAK UP PLEASE! bua ha ha...

I don't care if you're tough...I have a drink and a blaster, one of which is going to be used; which one depends on you.

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Re: Discussion: C-PI stories
« Reply #1 on: April 28, 2007, 07:07 AM »
I'd suggest leaving the old one up anyway for us "fans" to read.

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Re: Discussion: C-PI stories
« Reply #2 on: April 28, 2007, 07:45 AM »
Indeed, that's a good idea master Menelaos. I still enjoy reading them.

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Re: Discussion: C-PI stories
« Reply #3 on: April 28, 2007, 12:52 PM »
Well, ok...though I'm not a fan of that idea myself, as Hector Berlioz would say, the public has spoken!

I'll get on transfering them all as soon as possible.

DISCLAIMER: I have no idea if Hector Berlioz, a revolutionary french romantic composer during the 1800s, ever actually said that, nor do I have any reason to think so...I was just making stuff up.
« Last Edit: April 28, 2007, 12:58 PM by *<JO>*Jack Chronos,PL »

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Re: Discussion: C-PI stories
« Reply #4 on: April 29, 2007, 10:09 AM »
^_^ I like reading it, great story.  I'm trying to finish Battlefield Earth though, so I'll do that and then finish your story.

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Re: Discussion: C-PI stories
« Reply #5 on: May 11, 2007, 10:34 AM »
I like the story line ad mee to your fan list ^_^ lol

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Re: Discussion: C-PI stories
« Reply #6 on: May 12, 2007, 12:14 AM »
haha, ok you can be the first.

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Re: Discussion: C-PI stories
« Reply #7 on: May 12, 2007, 04:09 AM »
Hey buddy, Nice work you got going here.

Its nice to see someone pump out stories like that, good motivator. not like that red R2 unit.


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Re: Discussion: C-PI stories
« Reply #8 on: May 12, 2007, 11:24 AM »

G.M.P.A.

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Re: Discussion: C-PI stories
« Reply #9 on: May 15, 2007, 03:20 AM »
I know I've been adding alot of new chapters lately, so let me know if it's hard to keep up, please. I don't want to lose my limited reader base....

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Re: Discussion: C-PI stories
« Reply #10 on: May 19, 2007, 11:07 PM »
Nobody's telling me to slow down which means one of two things:

1. I can continue...
2. ...or nobody's reading...

*and the halls of the temple echoed the words, as if only the dead had heard*

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Re: Discussion: C-PI stories
« Reply #11 on: May 20, 2007, 01:05 AM »
I say you should continue.

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Re: Discussion: C-PI stories
« Reply #12 on: May 20, 2007, 11:12 PM »
haha ok, I was wondering if anyone was bothering with reading them.

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Re: Discussion: C-PI stories
« Reply #13 on: May 21, 2007, 10:28 AM »
I have been :)

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Re: Discussion: C-PI stories
« Reply #14 on: May 23, 2007, 08:48 AM »
I have been, good reads
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