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Offline *<JO>*KarrXon

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The Nemesis Discussion
« on: April 28, 2009, 03:23 AM »
You know the routine with these things. I like feedback, so enjoy!  ;D
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Re: The Nemesis Discussion
« Reply #1 on: April 28, 2009, 03:31 AM »
Nice start, make sure you bring your Padawan tho, Master! xD

And I love the end, lol.
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Offline *<JO>*KarrXon

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Re: The Nemesis Discussion
« Reply #2 on: April 28, 2009, 03:50 AM »
Haha not that time, but he does enter into the trilogy later.
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Re: The Nemesis Discussion
« Reply #3 on: April 28, 2009, 04:02 AM »
Can't wait!
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Re: The Nemesis Discussion
« Reply #4 on: April 28, 2009, 11:46 AM »
Sorry for the double post but,

lets just hope this nice Twi'Lek isn't evil! :(
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Offline *<JO>*Vargus.Traspro

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Re: The Nemesis Discussion
« Reply #5 on: April 28, 2009, 12:06 PM »
I love it.

Kept my attention and was very interesting, i always read your stuff all the way through it doesnt get boring?
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Offline *<JO>*Ekul

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Re: The Nemesis Discussion
« Reply #6 on: April 28, 2009, 04:24 PM »
I always have liked your stories. :) Its off to a great start!
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Re: The Nemesis Discussion
« Reply #7 on: April 28, 2009, 09:03 PM »
Glad you guys like it, (though I'm not sure why Vargus's comment was a question)...

The twi'lek is totally just a talkative passenger, I swear...  ::)
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Re: The Nemesis Discussion
« Reply #8 on: April 29, 2009, 08:18 AM »
Awesome once again, why don't you send this story to a publisher? lol
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Offline *<JO>*KarrXon

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Re: The Nemesis Discussion
« Reply #9 on: April 29, 2009, 11:20 AM »
Was the part about the detention cell in there when you read it?... because I posted that last night but suddenly it's no longer on the thread... kind of annoying.
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Re: The Nemesis Discussion
« Reply #10 on: April 29, 2009, 02:30 PM »
haha I like the new part.
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Offline *<JO>*KarrXon

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Re: The Nemesis Discussion
« Reply #11 on: April 30, 2009, 12:56 AM »
I forgot how strange it was to try and describe combat in an understandable way... haha
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Re: The Nemesis Discussion
« Reply #12 on: April 30, 2009, 06:00 AM »
Heh, nice parst once again :D
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Re: The Nemesis Discussion
« Reply #13 on: April 30, 2009, 09:14 AM »
No F***ing way!!!!

HE"S BAAAAAAAAACK!

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Re: The Nemesis Discussion
« Reply #14 on: April 30, 2009, 09:20 AM »
Master Karr is the greatest writter the Jedi Order has ever had.

I've printed this and will read it later during my son's football practice.

Glad to have you back Master.

Regards,
Menelaos
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