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Offline Tomius Nu'vada

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Re: Another day in the Temple
« Reply #15 on: February 29, 2012, 09:32 AM »
However, to the more keen eyed person, some of the coffee that they were all covered in had dripped into Tomius's eyes. This substance did not agree with his eyes which resulted in pain and a tear like substance being secreted from his blue eyes.
And because of Tomius's temporary fuzzy sight, he mistook the hooded Knight Kaeawc as a Sith intruder and charged at him...
« Last Edit: February 29, 2012, 09:59 AM by *<JO>*Tomius Nu'vada,PL »

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Re: Another day in the Temple
« Reply #16 on: March 08, 2012, 12:10 PM »
((Once again i find myself saying:

Someone revive this!  :D ))

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Re: Another day in the Temple
« Reply #17 on: March 08, 2012, 03:27 PM »
Kor' Keel Always bragged about having a fantastic sense of smell. This led him to the kitchen in the lower sections of the Jedi temple. As he was lured closer to the delicious meal that knight kaeawc was preparing, he saw Padawan tomius ready to attack knight kaeawc head on with his ignited lightsaber. With force speed Kor' caught Tomius' saber wielding hand and redirected the attack to the salad bowl near Knight Kaeawc.

"What do you think you are doing, Padawan Tomius?"

"That's a sith warrior! Can't you see?"

"The person you were charging at is our highly respected knight of our order. The only thing he could be accused of is cooking so seductive meals even masters can't resist them"

Padawan tomius, being already confused as it is, said :



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Re: Another day in the Temple
« Reply #18 on: March 08, 2012, 04:54 PM »
'This has not been a good day. Padawan Elod's cup has broken, Hopeful Rikochet almost choked on a bug, Hopeful Hermesean has now accepted the truth of his weakness, Master Narretas has knocked several people over, I've hurt my head and I can't see properly, and we are all covered in coffee!'

Tomius then looked at his hand, which he has holding his lightsaber in.

'To top that my lightsaber is now covered in salad and I have chipped a nail.'

Meanwhile...
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Re: Another day in the Temple
« Reply #19 on: March 08, 2012, 06:39 PM »
In the background, master Narretas witnessed the whole scene. He was going to go and explain his padawan's actions

'Hey, Kor, my padawan is just so enthustiastic, like I am, to try Knight kaeawc's---'

Suddenly a Big explosion could be heard all around the jedi temple.

What was that?! Master Kor' Keel screamed


Intercom: "Attention! Our security has been breached. Please remain in your quarters until told otherwise"


Master Kor had to leave and see what was going on. While he opened the door and ran out he shouted "Stay here!, I will come when it's safe to move"

(I like some serious stuff once in a while :P, this is the beauty of a story, you can do whatever you want. Feel free to contradict me :) )

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Re: Another day in the Temple
« Reply #20 on: April 25, 2012, 04:29 PM »
A month and a bit later

The temple was buzzing with the sound of the pitter patter of hopefuls. Jedi Tomius walked down the stairs of the temple to the main hall where....

(Come on guys, show off your imagination and story writing. Let's get a story going!)
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Re: Another day in the Temple
« Reply #21 on: July 21, 2012, 01:39 PM »
...Knight Elod was standing.

"Oh, here you're," said Elod. "I've been looking for you all around."
"Me?" said Tomius.
"Yes, you. You're late for your party."

Suddenly, the corridor was full of people, of smiling, happy faces, congratulating Knight Tomius with something that he couldn't understand... They were welcoming him, they were calling him with them. Friendly, familiar faces. Yet, somewhere distant... Where has he seen them? He couldn't remember so.

And then he understood. They were all the masters of the past. First he recognized master Arrius, who was smiling at him with his usual, a bit cracky smile. There was standing master Cosmo and master Menelaos. There were others, hundreds, thouthands... all bringing him away from his friend. Suddenly Tomius was scaried a bit.

"Hey, Elod, wait!" He called, trying to look back where his friend stood. "Where are we going?"
"Relax, Tomius. It's your day today," assured him Elod.
"What day?"
"The day of the Test. It won't hurt, because you're not a traitor, and then we will be together again, like in old times."

Tomius wanted to say something, but the crowd brought him away.

And nobody has seen the tear, which went down the suddenly older knight's face.

"It won't hurt. You're not a traitor." He whispered.
Jedi Knight Elod-hora Faria

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